Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, September 12, 2009

Mother In All Forms Comments

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I reflected in one of my poem
“O, mother you are one and no other”
Let whole world go mad but you never bother
We find no parallel as
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Durga Sethani 24 September 2009

Female as small daughter is full of smiles Help us to grow fast even if happiness is away by miles With her innocent smile we tend to forget

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Jester's P 23 September 2009

The “Mother in all forms” is portray of the big reality of a mother- the woman, the wife, the mother, the daughter, the sister, the friend, the everything…however, it speaks of one concrete image of a mother, and that is “love defined in hundred of thousand ways”. Very well written my dear poet…it is a masterpiece of the modern time.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 September 2009

This is a truthful poem of 'Mother in all forms. every stanza of your poem speaks to all forms of a mother. I enjoyed this poem very much-thanks for sharing it.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 16 September 2009

mother is mother and mother is home...no matter the places you roam...a hand of greeting always there...no matter how you fair..'chin up there'...problems...come and they go...but with mom...there is always a place on the floor...you getting better with age my friend...smile

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Lalvani Rekha 14 September 2009

Try to be honest which is always seen Not to create panic with unruly scene Prove the name worth with mother and modest Older you grow but still be the best

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Vijay Suwarnkar 14 September 2009

It is not your fault but with mad race We want to swim with no odds to face May not be situation with you alone

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Sulochna Pandit 14 September 2009

As I hear, you changed a lot in your new role Proved to be good mother and shared as whole

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Raju Rajput 14 September 2009

So beautiful daughter as you seemed to be Life was all heaven when you proved to be honey bee

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 14 September 2009

O, mother you are one and no other” Let whole world go mad but you never bother you're gifted! MOTHER is a visible ANGEL.

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Jigisha Vyas 14 September 2009

So beautiful daughter as you seemed to be Life was all heaven when you proved to be honey bee

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Maulin Shah 14 September 2009

Female as small daughter is full of smiles Help us to grow fast even if happiness is away by miles

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Suwarna Patil 14 September 2009

You have gone away to play role in life Important one and so vital as loving wife

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Santoksingh Jadeja 14 September 2009

How could it happen is any body’s guess? I smile with grace and challenges face

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Shilpa Maheswari 14 September 2009

So beautiful daughter as you seemed to be Life was all heaven when you proved to be honey bee

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Kunwar Patel 14 September 2009

All sweetness in life as life passed by We are longing to hear your loud cry You have gone away to play role in life

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Ratna Patel 14 September 2009

How could I scale the so high peak? Legs were crumbling and feeling weak

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there is a poet in me! 14 September 2009

So beautiful daughter as you seemed to be life was all heaven when you proved to be honey bee beautifully penned.....

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Kamli Kamal 14 September 2009

How could I scale the so high peak? Legs were crumbling and feeling weak

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Saroj Davde 13 September 2009

All sweetness in life as life passed by We are longing to hear your loud cry

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Reshma Punjabi 13 September 2009

Bridge the gap when there is rift Emotional binding when required the lift So beautiful daughter as you seemed to be

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