Mother Given Events Comments

Intergallactic Observer is right. This poem is worthless. For some really good work, come read some of mine!

The title makes no sense and the poem makes no sense. Words are run together, and singular verbs are used with plural subjects. SHAME on Poem Hunter for selecting trash like this as member poem of the day!

You say this poem is is the Dactyl form and I didn't know what that was, so I had to look it up. Thanks for teaching me a new word, though I can't see that the poem form really fits that. Also, congrats for MPOD! Dactyl: a metrical foot consisting of one stressed syllable followed by two unstressed syllables or (in Greek and Latin) one long syllable followed by two short syllables.

Shaded under banana leaves! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.