Thursday, July 2, 2009

Mother Earth - [inspired By Planet Earth By Love Doctor Eyan Desir] Comments

Rating: 4.9

She is our Mother
Born in Africa America or Asia
Born out of her dust
We are all Co-Heirs of her gifts
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Angelina Pandian
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Sami Hindmarsh 08 January 2010

Truly great message brought across! I loved the language and brilliant manipulation of the flowingness of the sentences! But I thought... and this is only subjective! ... I thought that It stopped started too much for me! But other wise Very Good! ! ! ! Well done! 9/10

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premji premji 08 July 2009

everything she owns is pure, except man.................................

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Jay P. Narain 02 July 2009

A beautiful poem. Makes you think about nature.

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Eyan Desir 02 July 2009

Hmmm, I couldn't have said it any better... thank you

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