Truly great message brought across! I loved the language and brilliant manipulation of the flowingness of the sentences! But I thought... and this is only subjective! ... I thought that It stopped started too much for me! But other wise Very Good! ! ! !
Well done!
9/10
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Truly great message brought across! I loved the language and brilliant manipulation of the flowingness of the sentences! But I thought... and this is only subjective! ... I thought that It stopped started too much for me! But other wise Very Good! ! ! ! Well done! 9/10