Tuesday, January 21, 2020

Mother Earth Comments

Rating: 4.8

Humble Mother Earth in her wisdom
never brags of her depths where all
at last return to meet
their ancestors underground,
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Aniruddha Pathak 09 August 2020

Mother earth beautifully penned poem, it begins so well and sustains interest throughout.

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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2020

Profound write, as usual. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Ravi A 11 February 2020

Humble Mother Earth in her wisdom never brags of her depths where all at last return to meet their ancestors underground, Sir, these opening verses themselves speak volumes. And the poem proceeds and ends in a grand vision. Indeed a solid poem from every angle. You are a seasoned poet and that is very much evident in this poem too. 10+

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Lawerence Mize 11 February 2020

Very well written poem on Mother Earth. Thanks for sharing.

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Captain Cur 03 February 2020

Beautiful descriptive poem of our life sustaining earth, the brevity of human life and to be aware of our small part in this universal consciousness

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Unwritten Soul 02 February 2020

The poem besides its reflecting the beauty by poet's thought it also make me realise that...why we call it Mother earth...because the selfless character and the loving sense the earth has, just like a mother. Thanks Yoonoos!

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Mariyam Reyshma 01 February 2020

A nice and perfect poem

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Mj Lemon 01 February 2020

The womb and the grave...we return...to where we begin...This is perhaps your finest verse (so far) . A magnificent poem, Yoonoos.

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Michael Hopkins 31 January 2020

Very well crafted poem, PH Friend. Nature just is the nurturer providing all we need.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 31 January 2020

Natrure's love flows well penned on run on lines.Thanks.

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Tom Allport 28 January 2020

A wonderful write of our mothers plight? Well penned.

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Kevin Patrick 27 January 2020

Beautifully enchanting, a true ode to our greatest mother, as we continue uncertainly into the 21 century mankind has and continues to whip her. It is important that even the most cynical and spiritually apathetic read a work like this. Thank you Yoonoos! top marks!

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Stephani Kievaughan 27 January 2020

Needs editing at " She akin" should read She is akin Beyond the grammar corrections needed I always appreciate such deep introspective heart felt thought. I always end up wondering the astrological sign each and every poet was born under. Pondering what sort of thought flows out of each birth sign

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Savita Tyagi 26 January 2020

Mother Earth’s patience and forbearance for her children and her nurturing worth remembering and showing our gratitude every day. Lovely poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2020

A lovely poem dear poet, rich imagination, great style...

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Nancy Chambers 25 January 2020

Nice poem but I'm a Christian and believe what the Bible says Colossians 1: 16 " for thru Him God (Jesus Christ) created everything in the heavenly realms and on earth" and John 1: 3 " God created everything through Him, and nothing was created except through Him" I am not criticizing. your poetry and will chalk it it up to poetic license. I love many of your poems and have a few in my collection. Please take my comments in love

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Naila Rais 24 January 2020

Wonderful description of tree! Naila

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 January 2020

A fine poem on Mother Earth indeed! Thanks for sharing

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Paul Butters 24 January 2020

Mother Earth indeed. Something we can truly believe in. To be cherished and nurtured.Plant more trees!

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Caroline Bulleck 24 January 2020

This is beautiful! I love the imagery and feeling!

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