Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Mother Earth Comments

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The sun slowly sinks below her golden borders
as darkness falls over all life form.

Tears of compassion spring up as she watches over her children: the
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Gregory Pierre-jerome 29 June 2010

nice poem again.....its amazing how u like earth

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 April 2010

Ma’am your max outstretched imagination I’d say ‘Sky is not limit but just nanus’. Motherly emotion deluging and it’s a cataclysm… did you get Motherhood? Well I’m conferring you that Motherhood...me a wee poet daughter Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS: ‘Then, In infinite love and care, she/places her finger on her lips, and/orders silence everywhere.’ Ma’am I’ll not read any poem today as I’ve to make a nervous-association with these lines… n

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Sameer Ahmed 29 June 2009

How imaginative Ms Knight. A very wonderful poem with a very unique description of scientific patterns of the earth that revolves and in between all its round curls it presents these Natural shifts very artfully. It is indeed a very pleasant thought when one imagines all the functionalities of the Mother Earth that is bestowed with countless beauties....

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Suicidal Magic 26 June 2009

'darkness falls over all life form' your work just is amazing to read! can't wait to read more!

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The sun slowly sinks below her golden borders as darkness falls over all life form...... mother or mother earth all rendr unqiu love and affection.. we can never forget it. beautiful write...10 read and comment on O.mother /........ augment ur views

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 09 April 2009

this is really inspiring and very mother like and beautiful

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