~ Mother Dear, O Mother Dear
Mother dear, oh Mother dear, were you ever young?
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This is a be a beautiful poem. You write with a wonderful imagination, almost familiar.
Heart renchingly perfect. Well-thought out. Masterfully executed. Superb imagery.
This is a very loving poem. I can see how much you love your mother just I love my mine.
A woman's heart is like the sea...deep and mysterious. Why wouldn't our mothers be the same...I can honestly say I've never discussed anything like this with my own mother. Very nice and almost guilt-tripping for me.
Lovely poem focusing on the common issues we face in life- in hopes of finding solid counsel and advice in learning to dealing with them.
Mother oh mother dear, do you ever read such a nice poem like i have one now Talking about our time, sad in bitterness, joy in blissfulness Mother oh mother dear, Adeline write one, and it is sweet one to portray everybody's life to live in her poetry_Unwritten Soul
That's so beautiful, Adeline. Some things we ask our mothers and some they volunteer but so many others we long to know about, don't we? You did a wonderful job and I enjoyed it so much.
What a wonderful poem! What a stirring comment on the reality of life.
The first and the last lines complete the summary of a mother n a daughter's lives in a shared experience of the pangs of motherhood, in terms ofall care n all dread...n in the end...unmourned, unnoticed......a v v natural sharing....
A stirring, soulful and searching write that seems to speak of tragedies unknown.i thought of my dear mother. Sadly beautiful and well done
Beauty and grace in metered verse! Very lovingly crafted. Thanks for sharing, and thank you for reading my poem All That Shatters is Not Glass. My most recent poem, My Mother's Mirror, was inspired by my Mom, who passed away in late 2013. It has taken me this long to be able to write something related to her.