Saturday, November 22, 2008

Mother, Can You Hear Me! ! Comments

Rating: 3.0

I woke up one morning at 3 o’clock at night
And I saw this light surrounding me
I went over to wake up my sister
To make sure that she too could see
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Marria Attar
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Monlano Kim 23 November 2008

MY God! I LOOOVE how you ended it. So sad. Don't die..keep writing!

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Naru Kaede 22 November 2008

Oh, you mean you dead? ? ? That you're mother can't hear you? ? ? I can't imagine how i died before my mom... but, this is sooww beautifuulll

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Gurpreet S. 22 November 2008

very intense and striking i would say.. well represented. i would give 10!

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