Mother, Can You Hear Me! ! Comments
I woke up one morning at 3 o’clock at night
And I saw this light surrounding me
I went over to wake up my sister
To make sure that she too could see
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Oh, you mean you dead? ? ? That you're mother can't hear you? ? ? I can't imagine how i died before my mom... but, this is sooww beautifuulll
very intense and striking i would say.. well represented. i would give 10!
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7/24/2025 2:13:04 AM # 1.0.0
MY God! I LOOOVE how you ended it. So sad. Don't die..keep writing!