Thursday, January 28, 2016

Mother And Son Comments

Rating: 4.8

Mother lookout-Again that bird has come
To repeat the same tones, sweetest some
In the dry, on the naked leafless tree
I do not know, why it is obscure to me
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Aabid Masroor
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Rajnish Manga 22 August 2017

Great poem with super narrative and a superb imaginative plot. Thanks.

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Nudershada Cabanes 21 August 2017

A lovely tale of Mother and son.rated.I enjoyed your poem.

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Jeannette Heywood 11 April 2017

Beautiful and extremely emotive

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

Really intelligent and poignant conversation between a mother and son! Very intuitively written, I loved this poem's inner beauty. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2016

A dialogue with the status of your life in your land. Nice work.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 February 2016

verily, a lovely poem in the form of a dialogue

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