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What this poem hits at breaks my heart. Keep tackling such subject matter. It's beautiful.

A good start with a nice poem, Monika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Monika, the sentiments here are heart-rending. However, a good poem in English or any language, is also consciously artful. Your ESL issues (lines 2 and 6) hurt this poem. If you want to improve as a poet, you should stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in good English contemporary poetry. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com If you like it, perhaps share it whit friends who might be interested? Thank you. JC