Saturday, March 25, 2023

Mother 6 - My Adorable Amma Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the red birds and blue birds,
Twitter tee - twitter tee- on tree tops,
In the early hours of tender dawn,
O Amma! I hear your voice calling me
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Congratulations, Geeta, once again. This remarkable ode to a loving, lovable mother, a poem par excellence, is ranked #17 today.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 March 2023

Such a loveliest finest Ode for your dearest beloved Amma, Dr. Geeta.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 March 2023

Top Marks for this Beauty and my appreciations for the lovely designed birds here. I have enjoyed tremendously your Ode to beloved and dearest Amma, Dr. Geeta. To my heart and toFavourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 March 2023

Most beautiful and refined poem I ever read about the beloved and adorable Amma. I can feel the great emotions superbly, since my beloved Mom is just like your Amma, dear Dr. Geeta. Indeed I never forget my beloved Mom's presence either.

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

! ....(cont.) for fathers also) , see my poem: If You Got Lucky As A Kid bri edwards : )

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

I offer some thoughts on mothers and their kids (It goes for fathers also

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

......Bharati's poem. BOTH Geeta's & Bharati's poems are very well done.

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

'When Father Passes Away' is

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

s WHAT'S GOING ON? ! I'm typing one-handed due to a wrist prpblem (luckily my left wrist!) , I THINK 2 unfinished comments were sent in error. SORRY!

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

) ....OOPS! ! I sent an unfinished comment, Bharat

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

Bharati Nayak has on PH (and in her and Daniel Brick's book of poetry, Poetry and Friendship, a fine poem about missing her father

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

This lovely poem is enhanced by Geeta's Poet's Notes. Thanks, TT! 5 STARS. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

Some favorite lines: 'When the periwinkle winks naughtily, When the sunflower laughs joyfully, ' BUT, who photoshopped that photo? !

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This poem is ranked 33 in the Best Poems of Members, today. Congratulations, Geeta

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SHRUTHI MENON 28 March 2023

Truly touching

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Congratulations, Geeta. This poem is ranked #32 among the Best Poems of Members.

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Pallavi Tripathi 27 March 2023

Loved it. Kind of like Edgar allen Poe's Raven minus the horror.

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Loved your ode to your loving mother, Geeta. Unusually emotional. Straight to my heart and favourite

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Nabakishore Dash 26 March 2023

Mother is visible God and irreplaceable undoubtedly.

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Nabakishore Dash 26 March 2023

Extraordinary verse studded with many metaphors.

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