Mother Comments

Straight from the heart, touching your readers in a very special way. I think this poem about mother is one of the really good ones that I have read. I especially love the end. Wise words full of feeling.

I like that it rhymes :)

Nice word's Mohammad, they express great love and respect for your mother.Well done.

Mother is that canopy strong but gentle to shield danger n’ build compassion great tribute enjoyed fully … thanks sharing Hon’ble Poet Mohammad-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Yes, this is a very nice piece of writing......telling us our heaven is under our mother's feet and this is a Hadit you have very well expressed in your poem........It is giving us a message.

This is a really nice piece of writing Mohammad. The expressions are so pure...it reflects through! :)

It is a very nice piece about your mother....your similes are good. Your alternate end-rhyming/rhyme scheme is well done and quite pleasant. You might want to make your metre more consistent...same number of syllables as well as accents. I like it very well. You did a fine job.

A nice piece of art that is rich in expression as well as rhyme. It reminds me my childhood.