Tuesday, November 10, 2009

**mother** Comments

Rating: 2.8

mother dear oh how i love you
more than you'll ever know
mother sweet protector
you have grown a gaaden of eden
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Amanda Eckols
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Allan O 10 November 2009

i think it is lovely Amanda..it's not really for others to tell one what they think when it's something as personal as to one's mother...but i think from your heart if this is how you wish it said..it is beautiful...i will only say one thing...proof read well..or as i use get a spell checker program running to correct errors in words...i do it all the time it really does help.... ~^..^

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