i think it is lovely Amanda..it's not really for others to tell one what they think when it's something as personal as to one's mother...but i think from your heart if this is how you wish it said..it is beautiful...i will only say one thing...proof read well..or as i use get a spell checker program running to correct errors in words...i do it all the time it really does help.... ~^..^
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i think it is lovely Amanda..it's not really for others to tell one what they think when it's something as personal as to one's mother...but i think from your heart if this is how you wish it said..it is beautiful...i will only say one thing...proof read well..or as i use get a spell checker program running to correct errors in words...i do it all the time it really does help.... ~^..^