Tuesday, September 22, 2009

'Mother 22/09/09 Comments

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BlitheIy I called my sister, yesterday
my mother reported ‘Do not bother me
I cannot entertain you’ - I thought I was
helping her, I was wrong, my loud
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Margaret Alice
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Wonderful poem indeed Ms Margaret. Cycle of events, the triumph of the right deeds and culmination of emotions are a triangular irony in life.Keep writing good poems.I give an honest ten to you.

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2009

Yes dealing with loved ones taxes all our faculties because we so want to do the right thing. Even the most involved children will have trouble figuring out the best thing to do. Age is a frustrating experience for the best of us. You've captured it all so well in here.

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Adens Kamwi 22 September 2009

well penned with very heart felt material...10

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
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