Tuesday, May 12, 2009

///Mother Comments

Rating: 4.6

The beauty of butter flies
The freshness of flowers
In you alone lies
The passionate powers
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akram saqib
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Prabir Gayen 02 January 2019

Fine diction about Mother and her soul......

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Heartfelt tribute to a loving mum elegantly brought forth with thankful heart and glorifying tongue. Beautiful flow of thoughts ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing Akram and do remain enriched.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 November 2017

very beautiful Motherly poem u may read mine MOM'S SMILES you will surely like it

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2017

Firm determination in your bosom rattles beauty, freshness and love height glory and shine you bestow on your child like that of spirits divine beautiful description of your experience of t he mothers never ending love beautifully penned dear poet. Thank you ver ymuch for this poem. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2017

The height of mountains The colors of rainbow The light of your love Keep every body glow... yes, mother's love is most powerful and lovely like mountain and rainbow. Nice collocation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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The beauty of butter flies The freshness of flowers In you alone lies The passionate powers.... it is only in you mother and no other....10 i wrote O, mother pse read it also

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Vinod Ak 29 May 2009

'Collecting such loving traits Nature does mother creates' Lovely poetry! Fabulous expression! 10+++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Stunning - 10+++ 'Collecting such loving traits Nature does mother creates'

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Lalitha iyer 13 May 2009

Very lovely poem, Mother is an eternal weakness or rather say eternal strength.

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Joseph Poewhit 12 May 2009

Nothing in the world better than good old MOM.

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it is beautiful poem. noi words will suffice the need. it is very good dear. read mine also 'O, mother'. you may find some similarity., , ,10

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Malcolm The Last. 12 May 2009

wonderful use of imagery......... perfect feeling of harmony and humility........ Great poem

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Herbert Nehrlich2 12 May 2009

A nice poem that nbeeds a bit of chiseling. Rattle is too rattly for the spirit of the poem. H

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Michael Nkwocha 12 May 2009

A beautiful write. Thanks be to God for the gift of our mothers. well penned 10+++

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