Sunday, March 8, 2009

Mother! Comments

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When I cry; I feel her arm consoling me
When I laugh; I feel her shoulder besides me
When I fall; I feel her pulling me up
When I rise; I feel her pushing me up
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Lakshmi Venkataraman
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When I cry; I feel her arm consoling me When I laugh; I feel her shoulder besides me When I fall; I feel her pulling me up o, mother and no other.. i still cry for u... nothing so lovely for us in this world...10 read mine o, mother, mom i miss you... mother and I wept..papa do u know and papa you too....

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Indira Renganathan 17 April 2009

Mother is all and God..a good poem10++

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Evaughn Gray 23 March 2009

Mothers do so much in all of our lives, even though many of us don't have that mother figure in our household..the way you describe your mother makes me want one.. ~ Hazel G.E

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Swagathnath Rajeswari 22 March 2009

Nicely written I love my mother than anything else in the world. She has initiated me in writing poem. Very nice sister.

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Shekhar Joshi 11 March 2009

I love my mother good work

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