Friday, June 19, 2009

Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mother, can you hear me?
Mother, screaming out in agony
Mother, I just want you to come home and scream out to me
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Ahtivah Lawton
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Ahtivah Lawton 20 August 2009

wow.its so hard 4 me 2 read my own poem since it comes from a deep and sensitive place

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 August 2009

Becuz this daughter is not gonna be here and is gonna deny you of being her Mother! it is beautifully worded poem and i love it to the extent that i almost cried for it....10 read mine o.mother.. mom i miss u... mom i cry eventoday.. mother and i wept..

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The agony of Motherly relationship is well described yet Mother is the only one who sheilds one from the vulnerability and the only soul that protects one.....10

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

an interestingly penned piece lovely to read...10+

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Ahtivah Lawton

Ahtivah Lawton

Brooklyn, New York
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