Thursday, January 15, 2009

Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I first saw her face
I don't know what was the case
Now when i look at her face
She seems so dearly that i joy with grace
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Rup Pokharel 16 August 2009

Susmita JII I got to read one of ur finest arts MOTHER. Well done. This shows you have much more to tell the outside world do give more. 'If you wanna remain alive even after your death do write something worth to read or perform deeds worth to write'-Lord Byron. and let me tell you the sweetest lines... 'Only Sweet memories of her with me Is the most expensive dowry that i carry Her caring eyes filled with tear This invincible time i cannot bear' do read my poems... Dying Ma, My Teacher, Wishes for You, Woman if you have time I give you 10++ for this art

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