Mother Comments

But you have her legacy; you have become the storyteller. And perhaps your children asked for a different sort of mother before they were born..and that was the mother you became instead. (smile)

We cannot discipline them with your degree of finesse It is something about which we can only reminisce..... who canreplace mother.... so touching write... i give 10 read mine O.mother andcomment. if u like u anaugment ur poem.

this reminds me of my mother who is no more. beautifull y written. marks 10

lovely piece...simple wisdom i think that made all the difference