Your eyes like glittering pearls remain embedded in my heart,
Your smile so sweet and charming- a vision unforgettable!
Your thick dark tresses like a canopy over a bright shining forehead
Adorned with sandalwood paste and a red circle of ‘ kumkum' at the centre,
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Through this wonderful poem, you have recreated the fascinating persona of your loving mother. It shows what she meant to you while she was around and now when she is not with you.
Thank you so much Geeta for this special poem written with so much love and nostalgia. Mothers hold the most special place in our lives and their memories remain fresh in our minds for ever.
Dear Geeta, a place in our hearts our mothers always near but unssen, but never forgotten. A beautiful tribute to your mother.
A great tribute poem is very nicely written and you have narrated everything clearly. Mother is above heaven. We ever keep her in heart and soul. An excellent poem this is.
A brilliant tribute to your beloved mother.Excellent wording.
A marvelous poem. It expresses in beautiful detail the magnificent features and attributes of a great Mother.
There is not a single day when I don't remember you... such is the power of love of a loving mother. A love and emotions filled write with universal appeal...a great poem!
Beautiful lines on the poets mother. The poet emphasises on her mother's charm, beauty and her melodious sweet voice. Mothers are indeed divine unforgettable souls. Always in our memory.
I pray that you are born again, In a pious family of musicians With a blessed voice of silken texture Where you can learn and sing to your hearts content, Fulfilling all your dreams and desires And be my Mother once again! ......this concluding Stanza says much about your mother and about your love and hope. This poem is a great tribute to her. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Five stars.
A beautiful Mother raises a beautiful daughter! ! ! You both were so very blessed to have each other- and we are blessed to have her daughter share her mother and herself with us. 10+++++++
Beautiful and intense poems by Dr geeta best wishes and God bless you
This poem I so beautiful. It did justice to the picture you have upload. I am sure she was a person with a great and pure soul
The words of this poem touch me in a way few poems have the heartbreaking pain of loss of such an important person. You honour your mother's legacy with this work. She is immortal in this work. A truly exceptional work. Thank you.
(2) I have tried my best to match that sophistication into my translation and also to retain the aesthetic core of the original poem but it is for the discerning readers to judge. Thanks a lot, Geeta Ma'am.
(1) It gives me infinite relief and joy to say that I have posted the Hindi translation of this exceptionally marvelous poem. This, to me, was not a small job but a real big challenge. The poem takes into account even the minutest detail that goes into this portrait.
Dear Geeta ji, after having read the first six lines of the poem, I saw your mother in my mind, and I touched her feet for offering my sincere pranamam. An Excellent poem by all means,