Moth To A Lit Candle Comments

Great Imagery here. A Great poem. Had ta give a ten rating here. God bless all poets alive or dead-MJG.

A beautiful poetic representation...Symbolic theme indeed. a 10/10.

Wonderfully written... the imagery played much of its meaning. This is a poetic morph, I should say.

Each poem I read of yours is amazing. Filled with imagination. Loved it

Your pen has embroidered a rich fairy tale on the canvas of the reader's mind. Lovely offering. Kind regards, Sandra

wonderfully poetical and symbolical

Beautifully written Reshma, one to read again, 10 Lynda xx

whant a marvellous write with a very strong use of metaphors..bravo, bravo i luvd it...thanks 10+++++ for this marvellous poem

Resh its a beatiful write--perfect sequel to Jathins (he too is very good) . very metaphoric too-- I liked the torch bearers leading the palanquin. regards anju

this poem has very good imagery i love it

and so you still suprise me with yet another exciting piece of poetry....if i were a painter i would paint a mural of your poem......because you give excellent imagery terrific job Reshma Ramesh i loved this piece

I enjoyed this poem...... especially the line 'Humble Love passed by', Nice piece of work......... do keep it up.......... thanx for sharing........ Really I am lured........lolzzzzzzzzzz

Good piece indeed Great images. Great work

I enjoyed the poem very much as you knew I would.

Very enjoyable read with a lot of immagery and meanings. A good story poem. I like the ending and comparison to the moth to a lit candle. The right title for this poem.

Moth, the epitome of sacrificial love, embraced by flame of love! How ancient, how fresh, yet again!

have read Jathin, just now...was a wonderful poem there...so natural you had an urge to come out with a sequel...equally wonderful your this write...journey in a palanquin of weird yet differently soothing imagination...10

Hey Reshma! This kinda atomic images would easily kill lovers of the world! ! :) Ammmmmmmazing! danger danger superb danger! 1000000000+

this is a different subject u picked up. There is some confusion about the way to lead the story; not very clear. Sorry.

MMM...WRITTEN WELL... THE CONTINUITY WASNT LOST... :)