Saturday, February 2, 2013

Moth-Eaten Mouths Comments

Rating: 5.0

My faint white wardrobe
Opened with two scarlet handles,
The clothes are on the inside,
Cotton, some silk, housing legions of you.
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Ruth Walters 12 March 2013

those moths must have been really fat after that feast ;) another great write

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Aria Siren 21 February 2013

I am right naked Exposed to exposure And nothing Wow. This piece is amazing. I like how it is doused slightly with humor which intensifies the feeling of reading it. You are very talented!

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Dawn Lambert 06 February 2013

Pretty ironic poem. Very funny to picture..... great work.

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