Moth And A Flame Comments

Sacrificing my life just for your one kiss of eternity that is such a cute line... I really like it. good poem. Becca

that was a wonderful poem...................

well well well......what a refrshing piece that was aijaz....soft gentle love...with hope..something youve done for the first time i think...and you did it well the sadness had hope and fresh lie bursting through.

what a reflected poem.... you almost cried my heart... thank you.... a warm feeling engulf myself.... a wonderful piece indeed.... your one of each kind

Deeply insightful poem. Enjoyed reading........10

a beautiful piece thanx

Selfless love beautifully expressed. Very touching. Warm regards, Sandra

'To live every day and die every night'...one such moment of realisation of pure love is worth a lifetime of togetherness....a well expressed imagery and emotions...a 10 from me...

wow a beautiful poem so much love and romance sooooooooo touching specially-- 'Who said no one loves you I am here and was made for you I born everyday to die every night To hug you, love you and hold you tight I love only thee it is my kind destiny Sacrificing my life just for your one kiss of eternity' +++++++++++++10 asif and A++ I loved your poem goes to my fav list. regards anju