when i reached her place, eager to see her face,
as i was fastening my fingers through my hair,
i felt scintillated, my god! ! ! today her charm was so so so fair,
& my heart started singing.....
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okay...now it looks smarter...as if you sent your poem to a good hair doer...
A good poem made difficult to read by the use of too many caps.
hey lovely poem and theme but why u making it so diiff to read with all the caps...
Finally We sAw tHe skY getTing daRk witH vermilLion coloR... saw, me too... by the time i finished reading your write...leaving aside all those caps there, i would say this write deserves capping...impressive no doubt...10
hey Dhanu, my heart stopped beating tooooo reading your sweet memorables great write i luvvvvvvvvvvit ++++10 love anju
i must say that, that evening was really a memorable one! ! ! ! Very nice, ya.... loved it.. ;)