Thursday, November 20, 2008

Most Memorable Evening Comments

Rating: 5.0

when i reached her place, eager to see her face,
as i was fastening my fingers through my hair,
i felt scintillated, my god! ! ! today her charm was so so so fair,
& my heart started singing.....
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Dhanesh (trying to be) poet
COMMENTS
Neha Aradhye 21 November 2008

i must say that, that evening was really a memorable one! ! ! ! Very nice, ya.... loved it.. ;)

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

okay...now it looks smarter...as if you sent your poem to a good hair doer...

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Reshma Ramesh 20 November 2008

phew......much better..........

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Colin Jeffery 20 November 2008

A good poem made difficult to read by the use of too many caps.

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Reshma Ramesh 20 November 2008

hey lovely poem and theme but why u making it so diiff to read with all the caps...

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

Finally We sAw tHe skY getTing daRk witH vermilLion coloR... saw, me too... by the time i finished reading your write...leaving aside all those caps there, i would say this write deserves capping...impressive no doubt...10

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Anjali Sinha 20 November 2008

hey Dhanu, my heart stopped beating tooooo reading your sweet memorables great write i luvvvvvvvvvvit ++++10 love anju

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