Thursday, August 27, 2009

Most Beautiful Poem Of My Lifetime Comments

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I’d like to write the most beautiful poem I could ever write in my lifetime,
A poem that tells how it feels in the skin the bright sun shine
And the sweet smell of the rice blossom brought by the wind
That makes us run to the clear river nearby and swim.
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Dennis Go 07 January 2010

Nice flow of emotions, sincere and quite touching. :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 December 2009

Life is comprised of both joys and sorrows and so is a poem. Your poem is really beautiful especially the opening stanza. Keep writing, misty-eyed lady. Best Wishes Naseer

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Aziz Alkaabi 03 September 2009

This is good and interesting.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

It must have been destiny’s game When you came along and my heart you tamed Just to leave me when things are fine And in isolation my heart shall confine.... you may miss the train if you donot execute it.. start pouring your ideas into theme. it will click and realise your draem....10 for thinkking of it.... read mine i think.... miss i miss u....cool breeze

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Miranda Van Yperen 27 August 2009

i really enjoyed reading that... thanks for sharing :)

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