Sunday, October 29, 2006

Moss Colored Bed Sheets Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ah my feathered feet feel light
Against the morning canopy
It will all turn out all right
I've felt this way before
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Raven Rasputin
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Matt Johnston 07 May 2008

What strikes me about this poem is the entrapped illusiveness within it… nice.

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R H 30 October 2006

Lovely imagery in this dreamy write. Justine

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Chuck Audette 30 October 2006

'Like the wings of a lazy butterfly' - like that line, particulary. Nice one! - chuck

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