Monday, September 15, 2008

Moss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upon the ground where shadows lie
And dampness from the solemn sky
Through all the seasons passing by
The path just gathers moss.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Dil Nawran Hriti 09 August 2022

This is so beautiful. Wonderful! Mesmerising!

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Ernestine Northover 18 September 2008

This one is woven so well. A lovely piece of work. Great imagery, I could see it all. Loved this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Kesav Easwaran 16 September 2008

a poem built on good imagery...the opening stanza lines presenting the 'moss' are beautifully poetic...my ten for you, Andrew

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 September 2008

i like your poetry Andrew, , , and this piece is no different from all you have written, , a pleasure to read, ,10

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Ramesh T A 15 September 2008

Wonderful poem to read and dream in loneliness!

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