Upon the ground where shadows lie
And dampness from the solemn sky
Through all the seasons passing by
The path just gathers moss.
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This one is woven so well. A lovely piece of work. Great imagery, I could see it all. Loved this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
a poem built on good imagery...the opening stanza lines presenting the 'moss' are beautifully poetic...my ten for you, Andrew
i like your poetry Andrew, , , and this piece is no different from all you have written, , a pleasure to read, ,10
This is so beautiful. Wonderful! Mesmerising!