Tuesday, January 8, 2019

Mosquito And Me (Triolet) Comments

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Mosquito you have taken my blood
With a gentle bite, silently
And I am sure it is enough for you to plod
And provide the results of my blood
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shreya Hacks 01 September 2020

Wow so well thought, you are fantastic when it comes to imagination and experimentation.

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Ricky Manhatten 31 January 2019

Humorous poem, lite hearted.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

After stepping out of his shadow When darkness became light. Thanks much

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 January 2019

Interesting and humorous, satire and thoughtful

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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2019

Thx Much Darren j.....

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Kostas Lagos 08 January 2019

Good one! Love the presentation of the connection between man and nature

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Thx Much Kostas Lagos

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Rajnish Manga 08 January 2019

Worthy of being published as a research paper in a medical science journal (but never in the second eventuality) . Thanks for this wonderful poem, Asim ji.

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M Asim Nehal 10 January 2019

Thank u so much Rajnish ji. Your comments are source of inspiration to write creative poems.

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