Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Mosquito Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I dissect you beneath my finger,
Pale grey mosquito, I feel you wriggle
And play dead, thinking I'll let you go; but
You are caught; and not till I remove those
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Tan Pratonix
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Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

Tan, awesome write... my feelings exactly! Brian

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R H 14 April 2006

A vivid and graphic account - a sense of divine retribution on the part of the narrator rang out. Regards, Justine

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

Nicely written. I hate mosquitos too!

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David Darbyshire 07 February 2006

Tan I hate mosquitosssssss...Bizzzzzzzzzzz but nice read good one dave

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