Friday, June 22, 2018

Mosquito Comments

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He had been there for a couple of days
in my toilet, hovering around;
all my efforts to capture him in my closing palms
always, always, drew negative results
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2018

A seed of remorse you placed in my heart gone rabid about bodily comforts, sorry; help me now live life without worry not swayed by pleasure and pain equanimous like you ever have been............touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem shared astutely. Thanks for sharing.

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T.Rajesh 05 July 2018

Very often we kill insects without giving it thought. But since you have given it a thought, you have come up with this fine poem. Very often we do things without considering others feelings and interests and this aspect. has been brought out nicely.

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Thank you much, Rajesh, for your kind support and good words about my poetry. I looked up in PH for your personal details in order to get in touch with you; however, no details could be found. Please tell me where I can find you.

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Kelly Kurt 22 June 2018

At some point, many feel this sentiment. A temporary, personal reaction. To indiscriminately destroy seems like a waste of time. Gratuitous actions are seldom beneficial. (mosquitos are not necessary) . That may change things.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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