~ Mosaic Lingerie ~ Comments

a lovely but sad story.

Inside emotion // Immixed in furtive // Passionate word-adieu // ‘Mosaic Lingerie’ Passionate and exuding romance who is spurned, dying…a rare phenomena indeed

Poetic climax came at the end…. Owe and Awe stuck she was… Nice poem..

Only the inner thoughts of this poem made me impressed.

To Sr. Poet Paul, Thank you. Copy to Poet Paul

I regret that (like so much of Ms N's work) I fail to understand what she means by Lingerie being 'adjectivised'. I happily accept her correction, and have removed my previous comment accordingly. I do still, though, wonder why she takes so little care with making her work understandable, in spelling, syntax, and vocabulary. Still, as long as she can convince enough people to vote for her, I don't imagine she cares very much.

Poet Paul has asked is the caption [title] of the poem anagram MOSAIC LINGERIE an ‘anagram’? My humble answer is the Lingerie has been adjectivised by word MOSAIC…the spelling of my name was a typing mistake and I’m sorry for inconvenience to Sr. Poet Paul and readers. Ms. Nivedita UK Copy to Poet Paul Hansford

Every miniscule has demoded psychic lingerie to keep an inscription of Pure Love for ex-wife… Indeed difficult in real life…poet has eurekaized and honored by new alchemy of jilted love… that is Great… dr. sakti

‘…Inside emotion Immixed in furtive Passionate word-adieu ‘Mosaic Lingerie’…’ Excellent indeed and a total change in scenario…poetically….dying…yet loving his ex-wife Ten++ AB London

In unique way poet made the paradigm shift…loved it indeed… Indeed a gosh geez melancholic…Romantic lingerie…

Its awe and utter gosh… Dr. V.

Inside emotion Immixed in furtive Passionate word-adieu ‘Mosaic Lingerie’ indeed a mosaic, over the ages, so many emotions, each a thread, a colour, wraps the soul, delivered to heaven

'...Owe awe struck...' I'm too PO PO

This is poetic climax with paradigm shift it is my humble answer to question of Poet IIP as a reader. Any questioning and answering will distort poetic grace, beauty…what I understand abut poem Ten++

still between the busy mind and the hands.. and other stuff... what else did he say too you.. and then as you...iip

a interesting write i like this very much 10

awsome and splendid to read...............