Thursday, September 13, 2012

Mortality Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through my mother I came on earth
To join the world and follow the path
Playing with neighboring kids with my ball
Knowing forever we'll remain as all
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Phanice Wamukota
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John Kago 01 March 2016

the poem does touch one's soul. reminds me of a past memory... whoever decided this to happen - well put and really good.

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Eindaray Kyaw 17 September 2012

Really good poem I really to read this one This is easy to understand...interesting to collect the idea and amazing to feel the beautiful rhymes... What I want to say is PERFECT....great job! ! !

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