Saturday, December 27, 2008
Mortal Heart. Comments
Rating: ★4.0
I know you’re with him now
every thrust a dagger in my heart
every kiss a lash tearing at my flesh
I see legs entwined locking bodies together,
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Jennifer Sollmann
27 December 2008
awwwww... this is really sad and the end was really sweet. i'm sorry for whatever happened. but keep writing! it was really good: ]
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7/30/2025 5:22:35 AM # 1.0.0
Massive springs to mind immediately; perhaps epic would be more apt. This resounds with a truth unavoidable for me. Without doubt I find much to relate to here. The largest mystery of love is finding trust somehow while not drowning within the longing. Emotion is a double-edged blade that knows no mercy. I'd rather burst into flames then freeze to death in isolation. Powerful poem, Wade! Warm regards, John.