Mortal Episodes Comments

Decoration of a tilted plastic smile Stands in the marketplace for sale My dialogues in the play essays toughness My weak character falls and doom permeates only strong pen can use such words..... grrt

You put forward an interesting premise. Each time I see with mortal eye and hear with ravished ear the words spoken of a Shakespeare or a Milton I feel my self transported and each time I see and hear something new and different. BB : O)

a good poem with a profound thouht

the first stanza itself is a beauty.

quite a fantastic poem, the way you start this poem, i am impressed by the narrative style.. enjoyed.