Friday, October 19, 2007

Mortal Devotion Comments

Rating: 2.8

Life suggests I
should prepare to die,
implies it would be
glad to help me
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Hans Ostrom
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Tom J. Mariani 09 January 2008

I'll start by praying I may live long enough to finish this comment. I have always wanted to be older. My first big goal was fifteen and a half; learners permit to drive my grandparents big white Buick Special with the portholes. Next sixteen; to drive on my own. Then twenty-one; legal age for everything back then. Then I was in no rush. It's different now as I edge close to sixty. I can fully appreciate your poem. I want to be older; one day at a time. I know the alternative of not getting older; not being able to finish at lot; Amen. Tom

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