Mortal Beauty Comments

beautiful imagery on a mortal beauty but the real beauty comes from within. lovely write

beautiful write. liked your imagination.

a beautiful poem in tribute to beauty waiting for heart throbs not for passing passions. I enjoyed it.

Beautiful poem, I swear. I know these devils.

Beautiful harmonious wording followed by wry humour a most fabulous mix. Bravo

Truth in your words outstanding

Whats more great then want and desire? A very beautiful and powerful poem.

Beauty is skin deep it is said, its what lies within that counts. Imaginative and enchanting write.

This depiction of feminine allure was lovely to read and brought a smile to my face, it could easily describe any girl who possesses the allure to drive a man (or women) insane with a desire to possess it for themselves, I like the way it was written and the flow. Good job

beautiful expression.....lovely write... a great read indeed...

The paragon of a beauty described in all her feminine charms! Many young men must be vieing with each other to find a place in her heart! The poem has sucked in all her symmetry and grace! Excellent!

Wonderful description, ending strongly. nice rhythm Loved it

:) femm fatale.... lovely write huh...no poet's notes there!