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So thoughtful and aesthetic portrayal of a common activity. Thanks.

A poem to read again and again and thoughts make thinking once again.

So pessimistic and distrustful! Very well written though.

Excellent piece of poetry to my poems list dear poet.

Breathtaking poem so well written its as a spell, captivated by its sound I sit and read and take all I can from it. I feel I am missing something and continue to read.10++

child-like bite its fingers, nice and lovely poem

Lovely poem, dear poet

Another quotable line... " " " " for the illusory flavour.hidden is the fire, calmly smoking off your expectation into ashes of regret. " " " " ...thanks poet

A marvelous poem well written. It vividly depicts greed and the continuing desire of men for fame and material wealth.

The poem is simply superb, I wish to maximum rating.

I know you are busy composing lovely poetry that's why u visit me when free so still I must thank thee

Nice! Thanks for sharing.

Simply beautiful! The true picture of today's opportunist, materialistic world. Thanks for sharing.

Amazing poem there. Loved how you described that with a flow that made me wanna read it time and again..10/10

manifest is but your for the illusory flavour.hidden is the fire, calmly smoking off your expectation into ashes of regret. just beautiful but I c u never acknowledege ur readers So feel happy ur poetry is worth a read

Interesting poem there.

From to dust...the pursuit of fame leads to dire consequences. The observation here that striving to receive accolades is little more than a dusting of the basest instincts (perhaps in us all) is a magnificent observation. Great poem, Yoonoos.

A very good poem on desire of man for name and fame. let not the ignorance of your sensual child-like bite its fingers, an apt simile. what seems manifest is but your for the illusory flavour.hidden is the fire, calmly smoking off.your expectation into ashesof regret. The reality. Thank you Yoonoos Peerbocus.

So glad I found you. What a wonderous ride you take me to, your reader, into the deeper waters.

Illusory flavour... This is a nice piece. Very