Saturday, April 14, 2018

Mornings Arrive Comments

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Mornings arrive
like a train emerging from a long, dark tunnel;
the light is still on
but quickly becomes unnoticeable-
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Glen Kappy 02 May 2018

Hey, Smoky! Hoping this finds you tip top. I especially like in the first stanza the image of the train emerging from a tunnel—I relate. Sometimes dreams warm us and uplift us as you write here. Then there are times I’m glad to wake up to the real. -Glen

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Susan Williams 14 April 2018

Smoky Hoss, you have a way with words- - - - ] Mornings arrive / like a train emerging from a long, dark tunnel; You are so rewarding to read, both in the sheer poetry of your verses but the sheer reality you cause us to step into.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Smoky Hoss 15 April 2018

Thank you very much Susan; your kindness is heartfelt. Peace...

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Lawerence Mize 14 April 2018

The imagery in this one is great. A dream is after all a suspension of reality. An escape to a different and often nicer plane. Enjoyed this one Smoky.

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Smoky Hoss 15 April 2018

Thank you my friend; I am always grateful for your comments. Peace...

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