Mornings arrive
like a train emerging from a long, dark tunnel;
the light is still on
but quickly becomes unnoticeable-
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Smoky Hoss, you have a way with words- - - - ] Mornings arrive / like a train emerging from a long, dark tunnel; You are so rewarding to read, both in the sheer poetry of your verses but the sheer reality you cause us to step into.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
The imagery in this one is great. A dream is after all a suspension of reality. An escape to a different and often nicer plane. Enjoyed this one Smoky.
Hey, Smoky! Hoping this finds you tip top. I especially like in the first stanza the image of the train emerging from a tunnel—I relate. Sometimes dreams warm us and uplift us as you write here. Then there are times I’m glad to wake up to the real. -Glen