Thursday, January 3, 2019

Mornings Are My Adversary Comments

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Mornings are my adversary
their obtrusively obnoxious, opportunist
they creep their rays, uninvited
and unannounced
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Kevin Patrick
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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

the sun barely peeped over the horizon. He would dance into my room singing Good Morning It's time to rise and shine! ! ! ! You can imagine how grouchily I climbed out of bed! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++ for a fellow sufferer

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Susan Williams 27 January 2019

Chuckling here! My Father was the definition of ebulience when

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Mj Lemon 06 January 2019

O yes, Kevin. I can feel this poem. A morning can stalk, creep, attack. It can be the worthiest adversary. This is one of your finest.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2019

The real way of facing morning motivates mind. An interesting poem you have brilliantly penned. Mornings are your amazing adversary. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us.

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