Friday, February 1, 2008

Morning Watch Comments

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The morning watch begins early
with coffee and a smoke topside.
Four o'clock on the ninth day
of November-
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Michael Pruchnicki
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Midnight Clarity 04 February 2008

Vivid, strong colour use. Crisp ending. thank you.

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Tom J. Mariani 04 February 2008

You reference Dickinson in your poem about poetry. This peom reminds me of her (265) The Sailor cannot see the North- but knows the needle can- Tom

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