Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Morning Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Morning walks in the Polo ground
Ever-rich in experience profound
Heath, spirituality and life crisscross
Gather here the diamonds or dross
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C. P. Sharma
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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 October 2015

I know not is it trance or I swoon? But in it's beauty my heart blooms. Very nice flight of imagery and rhyme, Sir. You have portrayed your routine and experience very adroitly. Hats off. Ten points.

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C. P. Sharma 30 October 2015

Thank you, I value your valuable appreciation.

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

Perfect! Positioning myself in Yogic style - your poem lifts up from simple walk in reality to profound meditation! I also love lotos pose! Great poem with discrete rythm!

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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