Morning walks in the Polo ground
Ever-rich in experience profound
Heath, spirituality and life crisscross
Gather here the diamonds or dross
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Perfect! Positioning myself in Yogic style - your poem lifts up from simple walk in reality to profound meditation! I also love lotos pose! Great poem with discrete rythm!
I know not is it trance or I swoon? But in it's beauty my heart blooms. Very nice flight of imagery and rhyme, Sir. You have portrayed your routine and experience very adroitly. Hats off. Ten points.
Thank you, I value your valuable appreciation.