Friday, November 27, 2015

Morning Train Is On Right Track Comments

Rating: 5.0

From far dwelling light is visible
Train is rightly coming on track
Blowing horn train is giving alert
Station man is giving signal sure.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 17 October 2020

Emotional train moves ahead with wonderful passengers. This poem is very interesting.

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Salini Nair 28 November 2015

closely related to life..nice sir

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Akhtar Jawad 27 November 2015

An amazing metamorphic poem, beautiful.

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Kelly Kurt 27 November 2015

literal or metaphorical, a nice write

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Shah Surja 27 November 2015

Beautiful........ poem (y)

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Sandra Feldman 27 November 2015

Casual riders, Well described, Life in motion, Train does ride. Liked your very natural and well conceived train ride.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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