Friday, July 19, 2013

Morning Tiptoes Down The Hills Comments

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When the moon stealthily slips away;
Golden morn tiptoes down the hills,
Finding her path to my door,
Wandering clouds glow and sway,
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Yasmin Khan
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Geetha Jayakumar 17 August 2013

So delightful morning..Beautiful write..Enjoyed reading it.

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R.j. Wynn 25 July 2013

You rock, it's awesome and screams to be read.

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Marcus Mckinley 22 July 2013

imagery and essence of aa wonderful morning. nicely done.

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Valsa George 20 July 2013

Such morning scenes are so delightful Jasmeen! 'Longings like bees hum and vent'..... a beautiful image! You have captured the beauty of the morn that tiptoes down the hills! Enjoyed!

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

nice imagery about the golden morn. a good write.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 July 2013

wonderful really your golden morn, my dear poet, thanks,

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