Thursday, September 13, 2012

Morning Time Comments

Rating: 4.3

Wind was blowing through the trees
I could hear the rustling of their leaves
The morning sun sneaking through the clouds
Birds singing morning sounds
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Eindaray Kyaw 14 September 2012

so so vivid..under the control of your magic pen...your poem runs on the track of beautiful flow! !

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Valerie Dohren 13 September 2012

How beautiful, a lovely day indeed, great imagery - great write.

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