Monday, September 24, 2012

Morning Sunlight Comments

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The sunlight hits down on the dew of the grass.
The farm animals walk past,
I turn to my horse.
This animal is the best love source.
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Bri Edwards 28 October 2012

anna, i like the pictures you paint with words. i like to do a lot of rhyming in my poetry but enjoy reading some poems with little or no rhyming. i happened upon your poem because i was looking at who was online now. i found it interesting that you say you live in the city instead of on a farm. does that mean you make up all this stuff i wonder. i hope you get to work/live on a farm someday if that is what you want and still want to do when you get older. nice job. bri edwards

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