Saturday, July 2, 2016

Morning Sun Comments

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When the still-red early morning sun
wakes up and climbs, on and on
to come and see our little world
search for changes not yet unfurled
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Frank Ammerlaan
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Susan Williams 02 July 2016

The tone of this poem is charming- it would work so well in a volume of poetry to be read to children. I just got through reading Mona Lisa - - you have a range of topics and styles. From what you said about yourself in your bio, you have not been writing long. I hope you continue to write and hone your craft as it appears you have been doing.

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