Sunday, June 9, 2019

Morning Star, Twilight Star Comments

Rating: 4.5

If winter, you wake up at four
From behind the closed window-door,
Whilst struggling to fight wintry chill,
I'm tucked in my cosy bed still.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2019

This is a well executed poem on Venus that stands out in skies— either as a morning star at times or an evening star at other times of the year. Well expressive one. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani I value your feedback.

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