Wednesday, May 3, 2017

Morning Star Comments

Rating: 4.9

Bright and radiant when you rise
In soft breeze butterfly flies
Time when all the birds queek
Beautiful sight for who seek
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Rini Shibu
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Qiniso Mogale 17 August 2017

Dark clouds slowly sliding. Beautiful! Well penned

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Rini Shibu 17 August 2017

Thank you so much for the encouraging words

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Lamar Cole 17 June 2017

Very lovely and enjoyable poem. Beautiful words from a beautiful mind.

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Rini Shibu 17 June 2017

Thanks lam.. Rini

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Siddartha Montik 29 May 2017

To strengthen me from afar Suddenly somewhere you disappear .. nice narration about the Morning Star we see when we wake-up!

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Rini Shibu 29 May 2017

Siddarth thanks a lot...

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2017

Showers of love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 11 May 2017

Thanks a lot Edward

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2017

A good metaphor of inspiration. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2017

You are unique my morning star. showers of love wipes all marks. Soft breeze, flying butterflies, queeking birds Shining star of my life. Just beautiful lines. You are a nature poet.. sooooooo lovely you have written dear poet. Thank you. tony

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