Monday, January 5, 2009

Morning Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to Ms. Alison Balsom, a gifted trumpeter)

iridescence
juxtaposing
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Ben Gieske 18 January 2009

Nice ending. I like it when you match your impressions with some images (exotic plants/ a haven for species; and, existing sky and sun /precious serenity of sea) .

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 09 January 2009

Good work keep it up!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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