Morning Snowflakes Comments

Very Moving And Powerfully Sown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Morning snowflakes are white and beautiful. I like them.

Descriptive, palpable, real- alive! An ordinary day- made extraordinary!

I like this, Jette! Like clot the air, rest in the nook of an old fedora, grey veneer—in general the nicely observed attention to detail. I like as well how you shaped the poem. And the last and closing line is perfect. It was easy to imagine myself into this one. Excellent! If you’re interested, my poem Forecast seems similar to me in its intention. Glen

Just discovered your work. It is amazing. This poem takes me back to an age of innocence (not the Age of Innocence) . The imagery could be from an old Hollywood movie, or a scene from a street corner today. That missing cup of coffee may just be a metaphor for every thing missing in this person's life. A terrific poem

On a wintry morning, a cup of steaming coffee would be so welcome! The man amply dressed for the winter morning hesitates before a closed shop, then moves on with his craving unsatisfied. But he makes sure

My comment Part 2- - a man hesitates before crossing. A rhythmic clap of soles ceases before the closed sign.- - - - - I'm all tensed up waiting for a gunshot.! ! ! I mean, some people get downright nasty when they don't get their coffee! 10+++

I feel like I slipped into a film noir moment! ! ! Fedora, ! ! The shop doors are still locked. A red sweater.Blue eyes glance and a wool coat closes. - - - - - - - - - - - - - -There's such a tension in these phrases like in a Humphrey Bogart detective mystery.

Beautiful and very vivid imagery of an early winter morning. Imagination runs most with the papers bringing all kind of thoughts to relate to man’s internal state of mind. Words lean towards anxiety but I am willing to include his hopes and aspirations too. Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing. Also thank you so much for your comment on my poems. For some reason I can’t open my own page to write thank you reply.

Snowflakes! ! Snowfalls! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

one fedora.. two.. three fedoras... a coffeeless morning for the three of them, maybe, but their day is full of poetry! and a very good one, indeed ;)

A painterly poem which is beautifully composed oh how i felt for the coffeeless morning great piece

I love when poems paint images, in feeling and in color. By no means easy to do! Your poem does both, beautifully! The effect is lasting and intense. Saturates us, captivates us in the good sense, Imagery and poetry that fills us with heartfelt pleasure, even in 'coffeeless mornings'.