Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Morning's Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

As dreams have turned to mist
Joy wakes the morning sky
In the wind the gentle kiss
Of summmer in your eyes
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Linda Ori 08 June 2009

A sweet and tender moment captured here with lovely imagery and wordage. Especially love the last two lines - perfect ending! Beautifully done! Linda :)

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Stephen Stirk 04 March 2009

Beautiful and heartfelt Steve

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